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Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Cheating


Today I cheat. Instead of writing something new myself I will use something that my students wrote. Before the school ended I asked the young writers in my class to write advice for future grade 3 and 4 students. I had a group of 3 boys who like writing, a pair of 2 boys who would rather not write, two students who have learned English just for half a year, and a group of girls who like writing. 

Advice # 1

Usually writers get their ideas if they take an animal and an object. Poets do it too. Some writers do it this way - they look around, write those things down. Afterwards they choose one and write about it. Some writers have really good imagination, so they only need to use it and they get a story.

The best way how to be a good writer is to read books and see how other authors write. See what kind of words they use, the description and grammar. Other way is to ask your friend or family members. They can help.

When you write a story, it is not enough if you only get an idea. Idea is first. Then you need word choice, then description and then grammar. That’s why you need to read other authors’ books.

Advice # 2

When you write a good story, it is supposed to be long and detailed. When you write a story, do not rush. If your story is none detailed, it is bad. If you do a story long you have to make it detailed and detailed story takes longer than a shorter and less detailed writing.  If you want a longer story you need more time. Longer stories take longer to write detailed.

Advice # 3 (the two students spoke and I recorded)

You can write what you want. Writers get ideas from books, from a computer, and from around them. Writers can write about animals, cities, nature, persons, school, plants, sports, ice-skating, ice, ice-cream, crocodiles, cas, energy, solar energy, fish, swimming, sail boats, and teachers.


Writers think first. You think what to write about. You think what could happen. If it is an imaginary story you can write all the things. If it is a real story you need to say what really could happen. If you are writing about a dog you need to know about dogs. If you don’t know or like the thing you write about, you don’t get good ideas.

First you make a draft. Then you make a second draft. Then you put it in order.

You need lot of words and pictures. You need to write what someone looks like, how it feels (happy or unhappy, angry or kind,) what someone is saying or what they are doing.

Then you have to look that your writing is all right, spelling and all. Then you make your final draft.

To become better you can use a dictionary. When you read new books, you learn new words. When you watch movies, you learn new words.

You need to write every day because you need to practice. When you practice, you get better.

Advice # 4

Where do we get our ideas?

We get our ideas from things that we see or hear or do. Sometimes we just write and write and write. Sometimes we get inspired by the books we read, the pictures that we see, and the music that we listen to. For some things we draw random pictures and write about it.

How do you make a good poem/story?

To make a good poem/story you first need to collect ideas. Then you put the collection of ideas together and put them into sentences (That is a 1st draft). Then you should change the words to make them more interesting and you should also put extra detail if you haven’t already. If you are making a poem you should shorten the sentences and try to make the poem sound more fluent. But it is ok you don’t need to force rhymes.

What are the habits you should have if you are a writer?

You shouldn’t just write on Monday but you should write every day and rather a lot, not just a few sentences. You should try to write as well as possible. If you can’t think of anything then you should get 2 words and you pick on and write for as much as you can in 1 minute.


The best part is that all the students have followed their own advice. 
Many of the students filled more than two journals this year


Writing gallery

Writing gallery continued




14 comments:

  1. Wow...your students give great advice! As you said, the best part of all is that they have followed their own advice and made this a wonderful writing year. Bravo students! Bravo teacher!!

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  2. I woul not call this cheating. In fact, I would call this sharing the wealth of students' reflecting on their year. Great advice for all of us!

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  3. Love not only the words, Terje, but the photos, especially of those journals. Wow. For young students, that is a lot of writing. Love also the advice. It seems to me that they heard some of that good advice from their teacher! Details, write every day, ways to get ideas-all sound advice for all of us. Thank you for cheating, although like Anita, I think it's just terrific sharing of your world!

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  4. You know this is very encouraging and what a great way to reflect on what they have learned. Your students applied what they were taught. Well done all! :)

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  5. I like the conversation you recorded in "Advice #3." Those kiddos of yours know what makes one write.

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  6. Love your writers' advice! They truly understand being writers and filling up 2 notebooks? Wow! Great work students and teacher!!!

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  7. Your students know what they know! They are giving great authentic advice...I think it is because the writing was real for them.
    Thank you for sharing how your work made a difference for them as writers!
    Amy

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  8. I loved the advice about writing habits! So true, there is always something that we can write about! You must be an exceptional writing teacher:-)

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  9. When you write a story, do not rush. What sage advice! You have developed thinkers along with writers. Well done Terje! You should be proud!

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  10. What a wonderful way for your students to consolidate what they have learned! Love the advice and the journals.

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  11. "You shouldn’t just write on Monday but you should write every day and rather a lot, not just a few sentences."

    So true! I must take this advice to heart. Your students know what they are talking about...which is no surprise given the teacher they had as a guide!

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  12. So I just need to put a collection of ideas into sentences....why have I been working so hard? I love all this advice! You have been a great mentor to your students.

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  13. I think it's great to share student writing, not cheating at all! These writers know so much! I loved the photos you included, too. Thanks for sharing.

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  14. Oh my gosh, I love this! I am totally going to use this with my kids next year. A great assessment, and a testament to the skills and concepts you have taught your kids. You inspire me!

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