Lying next to me in my bed, staring at the ceiling Mimm listens to Charlie and the Great Glass Elevator.
“Wait! Read that word again,” she sits up.
“Pulamula,” I read. (I believe it is “flusbunking” in English.)
She slaps her forehead, tilts her head back and spills out a string of laughter.
I know she recognized the word from The Big Friendly Giant.
“I know what the author did. He was writing,” Mimm pretends to hold a journal and a pen.
“No,” she turns around, pops up a pillow against the headboard and pretends to type.
“He was typing. Then he thought –mhmh -what should I write?” Mimm has the most thoughtful face a six-year-old can have.
“A-ha,” Mimm’s face lights up and she starts “scrolling” down the pillow.
“He just read and read what he had written before and found the best word to use again.” With this sentence she sets the pillow back to normal and settles restfully next to me.
The teacher-in-me thinks how Katie Wood Ray explained the craft of writer’s office work and how we should encourage students hypothesize about what’s behind actual pieces of writing. I quickly want to write down the keywords from what had just happened.
“What are you writing?” is a very natural question to follow when Mimm sees me writing on the post-it. She leans over to see closer.
“I just wanted to write down how you thought about the author’s work so I can use it as an example at school.”
Once again she settles back restfully and contently.
“I know. I have such a fantasy. And I talk too much. I know it may be annoying but I am so much more useful than my sisters. You can use me as an example all the time.”
The words of a six year old, toooo funny! Love the "so much more useful than my sisters." The thought process and noticing of the language was incredible. So glad you shared this moment with Mimm.
ReplyDeleteHow funny. But what a great snapshot of someone's thought process as they listen/read a book. And I love how you captured her conversation. Especially the last paragraph "...but I am so much more useful than my sisters." LOL
ReplyDeleteI believe that she just stepped out of a Roald Dahl novel, don't you think? I love that you take us into your home for a slice of time, a glimpse of such a special time. And I love that you are capturing these scenes on paper, in your blog, etc. How wonderful! Those last two lines-magical!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cute story! Love the way you described her movements and hand gestures to go along with the conversation!
ReplyDeleteOh, these are the moments that I wish for in my future! What conversations! What thoughts! I love it all -- "I am so much more useful than my sisters." Ha! One smart cookie!
ReplyDeleteHa, ha, ha! Love it! I love the line, "She slaps her hear forward, tilts her head back and spills out a string of laughter." What a great image. And the last few lines, so funny!
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